Hello Peeps!
I’m trying a new Photo Challenge today hosted by NEKNEERAJ. It was such an intriguing image…
Here’s what it has inspired in me. Hope you all like it.
A Smokescreen
Tears had dried up long ago
But the pain still coursed through
Snaking its way like a slow poison
Hurting with each breath that she drew
Welcoming the bottomless abyss
She often painted it grey
The poison cured her
Dulling her senses night and day
The void he left behind
Got filled with grey smoke
The deafening silence was bearable
When words mixed with fumes spoke
The vapours that blurred her senses
Engulfed her in an embrace
In the endless wait and anguish
A rolled up joint became her only solace….
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you made it as relevant to the photo as possible, ‘when words mixed with fumes spoke..’
Thank you! I tried my best to stand out amongst the 10000s of poets on WP 😛 😀
haha make it 10001
Hahah yusss
And drinks
Haha.. for each his own. Jisso jo karna hai woh kare. Mujhe kya!! 😀
Hahaha,, I was asking you!! If you drink!! Lol
LOL…
😃
Smoking is just a bad idea
A very bad idea… I don’t endorse smoking*
But you wrote about it beautifully,,like you smoke with passion,,,.
Hahahaha… I write with passion 😛
Thank you 🙂
And smoke??
No re baba… I hate smoking! I don’t understand why people like to breath in bad smelling air n then again breath it out.
Seems utterly useless to me.
Hahaha,,,,, great
Just joking
Hahahaha.. yuss. All taken in good spirits! 😉
That’s nice of you Ashwini
Beautifully written, its like you felt what’s in the picture, so deep 😊
Thank you so much!!
That’s such a nice compliment. I hoped to have felt the image and captured the emotions the in words. 🙂