The ocean inspires many things. Here’s my entry for the Weekly Photo Prompt hosted by Sue Vincent.
Silence
I stood on the edge of ecstasy
As you wrapped your arms around me
Easing into your ebb and flow
Like a ship at the high sea
I lost myself into you so
That we merged like the sea and sky
Toeing the invisible line
Where our truths turned to a lie
The waves swelled and crashed
Or ever so gently lapped at the shore
The lightening left fresh scars
As thunderous emotions fell and rose
The dreams that we shared
Lay shattered on a stormy shore
As we stood on the edge of reality
Where you were mine no more
Yet still, wrapped in your arms
I feel safe and warm
Till the foreboding sets in, just like
A reticent silence is followed by the storm…
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Wonderful words. So soothing. 😊👍
Thank you. I’m glad you liked it 🙂
Splendid. I enjoyed your poem😊
Thank you so much! 🙂
Lovely poem, thanks for sharing.
Thank you. It was fun composing this piece 🙂
Really ?That’s the trick of blogging the successful ones are those who enjoy it. 👍👍👍👍
How true…we should enjoy everything that we do! 🙂
Thank you so much.
Definitely! 🙂
🙏🌺🙏🌺🙏🌺
beautiful!
Thanks Priyesh.. 🙂
It’s very soothing and splendid poem!
❤❤
Thank you dear. I’m glad you liked it 🙂
My absolute pleasure, Ashwini❤❤
Shabd mast use kelet yat… Mazi dictionary improve hoil tuzya post vachun 🤗
Hahaha..thank you 🙂
Lovely, Ashwini… I’ve added a link to the round-up.
Thank you! 🙂
Loved the flow and the ending is brilliant, I didn’t know you are a poet too
🙂 Thank you.
Just read the blog name “Kaleidoscope…” 😛
yeah very talented, you are. however, what WP needs is another poet 😀
LOL…world is suddenly full of poets, writers and influencers! It makes all of our work redundant in a way 🙂
I guess this must be the dilemma of writers in every age, do we have something that is novel, or worth our time and the readers. Dont stop writing poetry, you did well!
Well, I guess. Thanks but 🙂