Bottomless Abyss

February 8, 2019 /

When you have friends that match your weirdness and eccentricities, random poetry challenges are born.

This poem was composed as a response to a friend’s “brainwave”. So the challenge was to compose a poem starting with “you tell me that I’m hopeless” and end it with “how much I liked to breathe”.

Here’s what my “brainwave” conceived!

You tell me that I’m hopeless…
But to me, life hasn’t been fair yet
I have tried to smile,
Baring the burnt roads
I have walked thousands of miles
Surviving places so dark
Where death slowly sinks its teeth
I have welcomed the – bottomless abyss
Before I finally remembered
how much I liked to breathe…
-Ashwini Nawathe
PS: The poem turned out to be surprisingly good, didn’t it!

ASHWINI NAWATHE

Hi, I'm a nature lover, a trekker and an ardent reader from Mumbai, India. After playing Lawyer for a time, I shifted to my passion and love – History! A 9 to 6 job as a Senior Executive: Research, Content Writer and Editor helps me earn by bread and butter which is ultimately spent on travel and food :)

14 Comments

Sunith

August 3, 2018 at 3:23 pm Reply

It sure did Ashwini

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- Ashwini Nawathe
  
  August 3, 2018 at 3:27 pm Reply
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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ESP

August 3, 2018 at 4:45 pm Reply

You wrote my comment in the PS, the bottomless abyss did produce a satisfied poet 🙂

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- Ashwini Nawathe
  
  August 3, 2018 at 5:42 pm Reply
  
  Hahaha…thank you 🙂
  
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shalini

August 3, 2018 at 6:50 pm Reply

Oh yes it is simply fabulous… I loved it ❤️

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- Ashwini Nawathe
  
  August 3, 2018 at 11:15 pm Reply
  
  Thank you Shalini 🙂
  
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Kurian

August 4, 2018 at 11:35 am Reply

That’s an interesting one Ashwini, meeting the challenge

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- Ashwini Nawathe
  
  August 4, 2018 at 11:53 am Reply
  
  Thank you 🙂
  
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  - Kurian
    
    August 4, 2018 at 4:35 pm Reply
    
    You are welcome Ashwini
    
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ravindra nayak

August 30, 2018 at 5:07 pm Reply

Thought provoking beautiful write dear,🌷

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- Ashwini Nawathe
  
  August 30, 2018 at 5:13 pm Reply
  
  Thank you 🙂 It was a very interesting “brainwave”.
  
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  - ravindra nayak
    
    August 30, 2018 at 5:26 pm Reply
    
    You’re most welcome 🌷
    
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lifeatablur

February 8, 2019 at 10:04 pm Reply

Awesome Job!

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- ASHWINI NAWATHE
  
  February 8, 2019 at 11:39 pm Reply
  
  Thank you!
  
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